Before we stamp approval on your app, however, we'd like to request clarification in regards to Kaworu's first Echo - an Echo cause must be a first-time occurrence within Locke City and elicit a distinct mental reaction to produce the actual Echo! Would the time at which it was triggered have been the first time he'd looked at the full moon while in Locke? If not, then a sight more directly reminiscent of the sight of the Earth from space would be a preferable trigger.
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Before we stamp approval on your app, however, we'd like to request clarification in regards to Kaworu's first Echo - an Echo cause must be a first-time occurrence within Locke City and elicit a distinct mental reaction to produce the actual Echo! Would the time at which it was triggered have been the first time he'd looked at the full moon while in Locke? If not, then a sight more directly reminiscent of the sight of the Earth from space would be a preferable trigger.
With this addressed, you'll be excellent to go.