Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth, and for your patience!
Before we pass final verdict on your app, however, we wish to request a few revisions! Namely, we'd like to see a bit of expansion upon the reincarnated history and personality sections further exploring and drawing from where Pia's cultural background may have influenced her upbringing (especially where it may have impacted and/or clashed with her eventual passion for matters of gender rights) and personality as an adult, accounting also for religious influence - it's mentioned that her father was Catholic, but what of her mother?
We'd also like to request an alternative third-person sample for a widened picture of her character in combination with her first-person - both samples prominently showcase her interest in fashion and critical eye!
Apologies for the inconvenience and we look forward to hearing from you soon - at which we'll be straight back with you.
REVISION REQUEST
Before we pass final verdict on your app, however, we wish to request a few revisions! Namely, we'd like to see a bit of expansion upon the reincarnated history and personality sections further exploring and drawing from where Pia's cultural background may have influenced her upbringing (especially where it may have impacted and/or clashed with her eventual passion for matters of gender rights) and personality as an adult, accounting also for religious influence - it's mentioned that her father was Catholic, but what of her mother?
We'd also like to request an alternative third-person sample for a widened picture of her character in combination with her first-person - both samples prominently showcase her interest in fashion and critical eye!
Apologies for the inconvenience and we look forward to hearing from you soon - at which we'll be straight back with you.