theearth: I really like this color you guys. (Blue-mod's icon) (I'M ON A HORSE)
Save the Earth Mods ([personal profile] theearth) wrote 2013-09-22 03:26 am (UTC)

REVISION REQUEST

Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth!

While your application looks fantastic for the most part, however, we'd just like to ask for a couple of revisions - firstly, while the link you've provided is informative enough, as protocol we'd still nonetheless like a brief history write-up providing Gale's role in canon in your words.

Secondly, remember that an Echo consists of a trigger and an effect! Either putting on a ring that resembled Gale's tag ring in some way would, say, Echo Gavin a memory of the tag ring or the actual ring itself; or the appearance of Gale's tag ring would need to be caused by a canon parallel - an occurrence resembling something in Gavin's life as Gale that would "remind" him of the tag ring - or an encounter with the plot, as in one of the events listed on the timeline - even seeing the lights on April 1st or taking a drink of Locke City's tap water in August would do the trick.

Apologies for the inconvenience - with both of these areas done with, you'll be good to go.

Post a comment in response:

(will be screened)
(will be screened if not validated)
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org