Before we stamp final approval on your app, however, we'd like to request just a little of expansion - namely in Sam's reincarnated history and/or personality with a bit more of a look at how he gets along with/reacts to other people - his roommates for example. In addition, the second of his samples is just a tad short - for a larger sample of voice we'd like to request an alternative one in the form of a sample network post.
With both of these we shall get right back to you.
REVISION REQUEST
Before we stamp final approval on your app, however, we'd like to request just a little of expansion - namely in Sam's reincarnated history and/or personality with a bit more of a look at how he gets along with/reacts to other people - his roommates for example. In addition, the second of his samples is just a tad short - for a larger sample of voice we'd like to request an alternative one in the form of a sample network post.
With both of these we shall get right back to you.