Before we stamp our final verdict on your app, however, we'd like to request clarification relating to Luci's first Echo - remember that an Echo has both a cause, either an event that "reminds" a character of a past life or a supernatural event as listed on the timeline of events; and the Echo itself, which is a return from a past life. Were Luci's drawings the product of an Echo (would they be things that Lux drew in her past life "returned" via Echo and not things Luci drew herself at all? Did she perhaps actually receive an Echo causing her to imagine her brother as a knight when she was younger?) or the effect (did she simply forget that she'd drawn her brother as a knight, with the reminder triggering an Echo? If so, that still leaves something to gain).
With clarification on a first Echo trigger and effect, you shall be good to go.
REVISION REQUEST
Before we stamp our final verdict on your app, however, we'd like to request clarification relating to Luci's first Echo - remember that an Echo has both a cause, either an event that "reminds" a character of a past life or a supernatural event as listed on the timeline of events; and the Echo itself, which is a return from a past life. Were Luci's drawings the product of an Echo (would they be things that Lux drew in her past life "returned" via Echo and not things Luci drew herself at all? Did she perhaps actually receive an Echo causing her to imagine her brother as a knight when she was younger?) or the effect (did she simply forget that she'd drawn her brother as a knight, with the reminder triggering an Echo? If so, that still leaves something to gain).
With clarification on a first Echo trigger and effect, you shall be good to go.