The expanded sections look great, but the first sample is well over a year old and the second... well, uh, I have no idea what the context of the second one is, to frank. I'm assuming it was from a previous game, but in any event, I'm going to need some fresh samples to work off of here. Make sure voice is clearly demonstrated as well in both cases.
This isn't a rejection by any means, so don't get discouraged! Once this is done, the app is ready for approval.
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This isn't a rejection by any means, so don't get discouraged! Once this is done, the app is ready for approval.