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Save the Earth Mods ([personal profile] theearth) wrote 2014-01-23 09:33 am (UTC)

REVISION REQUEST

Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth!

Before we give you the final clear to enter, though, while a write-up of the events leading into those of Anna's canon followed by the wiki link provided for most of what occurs during the film will do nicely, we'd additionally like to request a closing of it in your own words - another write-up of what was settled/changed for Anna by the end of it!

Also, while the proposed first Echo for Abby is at a good start, it's the psychological response to an event that triggers a canon parallel Echo, and to be sure we'd like to see the trigger strengthened a tad to "remind" her of the experience that she'd recall a bit further - for example, if she wouldn't have encountered the snake statues herself, perhaps something might have startled her or she might've been forced to run from something while she had theidea of giant animated stone snakes in mind.

Our apologies for the inconvenience - but with both of these addressed, we'll be right back with you!

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