However, we'd like to request only a couple revisions - the first would be a grammatical comb through your application, notably watching for consistency of tenses by section; the second would be only a small alteration to Fil's first Echo. While seeing Killian's dwarven runes would naturally be a fine trigger for it, as it will be technically the sight of writing that'll trigger it, an Echo related to reading and/or writing will be preferable!
Content-wise, your app is certainly good to go - and we hope to hear back from you soon!
REVISION REQUEST
However, we'd like to request only a couple revisions - the first would be a grammatical comb through your application, notably watching for consistency of tenses by section; the second would be only a small alteration to Fil's first Echo. While seeing Killian's dwarven runes would naturally be a fine trigger for it, as it will be technically the sight of writing that'll trigger it, an Echo related to reading and/or writing will be preferable!
Content-wise, your app is certainly good to go - and we hope to hear back from you soon!