Before we formalize our verdict, however, we'd like to request a grammatical run through your app, most particularly to catch consistency of tenses within sections - so we're certain everything scans correctly! Additionally, we wish to see an alternative third-person sample, preferably also from the point of view of reincarnated Thranduil, as his current one seems best with the context of canon.
So sorry for the inconvenience - but apart from that, your app is fine to go!
REVISION REQUEST
Before we formalize our verdict, however, we'd like to request a grammatical run through your app, most particularly to catch consistency of tenses within sections - so we're certain everything scans correctly! Additionally, we wish to see an alternative third-person sample, preferably also from the point of view of reincarnated Thranduil, as his current one seems best with the context of canon.
So sorry for the inconvenience - but apart from that, your app is fine to go!