However, we'd like to request a couple of revisions in the areas of Nathan's reincarnated personality and network sample before we stamp our final verdict - on the former, we'd like to see a bit more not only on what Nathan's circumstances have created in him, but on how he's lost or differently exhibits some of his more distinctive traits as Near. For example, is the heart of Near's dependent tendencies and/or more childish quirks still there, or has Nathan entirely grown away from them.
In regards to the network sample we'd like to request something longer and/or alternative - preferably not in the form of a first post! - for more of a look at his voice.
REVISION REQUEST
However, we'd like to request a couple of revisions in the areas of Nathan's reincarnated personality and network sample before we stamp our final verdict - on the former, we'd like to see a bit more not only on what Nathan's circumstances have created in him, but on how he's lost or differently exhibits some of his more distinctive traits as Near. For example, is the heart of Near's dependent tendencies and/or more childish quirks still there, or has Nathan entirely grown away from them.
In regards to the network sample we'd like to request something longer and/or alternative - preferably not in the form of a first post! - for more of a look at his voice.
We hope to hear back from you soon!