Of course! I've made a few changes in the application, but I figured I'd mark them here to make it easier for you:
- Misato's hair is now black. - Indicated I was also using information from End of Evangelion. - Kept the physical change, ditched the memory. We'll save that trauma for later! - I've hopefully clarified this sentence (which was probably the very sentence that lead to this trouble in the first place): "But the second that changes and life becomes a lot more complicated, Misato's liable to seek out the same crutches she relied on in her a past life, alcohol being one of them." To clarify: Misato in her current incarnation only drinks socially; things are pretty swell and there's no reason to ruin a good thing that's going pretty great as-is. But it's likely later on, she'll eventually making the same stupid mistakes when she remembers all the fucked up shit that happened in her past life.
Misato's not all that great about this whole self-improvement thing.
Let me know if you need any further clarification or have any other questions.
Re: REVISION REQUEST
- Misato's hair is now black.
- Indicated I was also using information from End of Evangelion.
- Kept the physical change, ditched the memory. We'll save that trauma for later!
- I've hopefully clarified this sentence (which was probably the very sentence that lead to this trouble in the first place): "But the second that changes and life becomes a lot more complicated, Misato's liable to seek out the same crutches she relied on in her a past life, alcohol being one of them." To clarify: Misato in her current incarnation only drinks socially; things are pretty swell and there's no reason to ruin a good thing that's going pretty great as-is. But it's likely later on, she'll eventually making the same stupid mistakes when she remembers all the fucked up shit that happened in her past life.
Misato's not all that great about this whole self-improvement thing.
Let me know if you need any further clarification or have any other questions.