Before we stamp our acceptance, however, we'd like to request a quick comb-through for tightening up of grammar - especially minding comma and other punctuation use. In addition, might we request an expansion on Mithos's personality as Michael? That is, Michael's reincarnated personality section points out what influences he lacks that Mithos had - but what kind of person is he on his own without them?
On another much simpler point, the application form has changed slightly since their closing and re-opening - your form appears to be missing the "currently-played" section!
We apologize for the inconvenience - and with that, you shall be good to go!
REVISION REQUEST
Before we stamp our acceptance, however, we'd like to request a quick comb-through for tightening up of grammar - especially minding comma and other punctuation use. In addition, might we request an expansion on Mithos's personality as Michael? That is, Michael's reincarnated personality section points out what influences he lacks that Mithos had - but what kind of person is he on his own without them?
On another much simpler point, the application form has changed slightly since their closing and re-opening - your form appears to be missing the "currently-played" section!
We apologize for the inconvenience - and with that, you shall be good to go!