However, while your understanding and interpretation of Leo read strongly, we've a few concerns regarding his reincarnation as Lau - namely:
1. His childhood in an orphanage, which are no longer in use in the U.S., in favor of the foster care system. 2. His first Echo - while the cause is reasonable, what is "returned" would touch upon things outside of the scope of the first season of the game. 3. His cockiness in comparison to Leo. We do not ask necessarily that this be changed - we're simply curious as to where it arises in this life!
We understand that both the first and second facts have significant bearing on both Lau's history and his personality, and we apologize for the inconvenience! However, again, your grasp of the character seems strong enough that we would highly encourage you to try to work around those points if it wouldn't mean losing out on what you had in mind!
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However, while your understanding and interpretation of Leo read strongly, we've a few concerns regarding his reincarnation as Lau - namely:
1. His childhood in an orphanage, which are no longer in use in the U.S., in favor of the foster care system.
2. His first Echo - while the cause is reasonable, what is "returned" would touch upon things outside of the scope of the first season of the game.
3. His cockiness in comparison to Leo. We do not ask necessarily that this be changed - we're simply curious as to where it arises in this life!
We understand that both the first and second facts have significant bearing on both Lau's history and his personality, and we apologize for the inconvenience! However, again, your grasp of the character seems strong enough that we would highly encourage you to try to work around those points if it wouldn't mean losing out on what you had in mind!