Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth! Though for the most part your app looks excellent, we'd like you to make a few revisions before we officially accept your app.
Specifically, we'd like your First Echo clarified. Was her first Echo triggered by the light in the sky or the sight of the Antarctic ocean in the pamphlets? In addition, Echoes and their affects can only occur within Locke City, and the location in which Caren viewed the pamphlets is unclear.
REVISION REQUEST
Specifically, we'd like your First Echo clarified. Was her first Echo triggered by the light in the sky or the sight of the Antarctic ocean in the pamphlets? In addition, Echoes and their affects can only occur within Locke City, and the location in which Caren viewed the pamphlets is unclear.
We hope to hear from you soon!