Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth! However, we'd like to see a few revisions made to your app. First, Echoes can only return one thing. In this case, it's unclear whether what is being returned is the memory of the event or the sense of being male. A memory of something occurring while being male is different from a constant sense of maleness, and we ask that you choose one or the other.

In addition, though Avery's sex swap seems solid to us, we have a few concerns about the character of "Sis": specifically, the amount of detail put into her character. If we're not mistaken, this is meant to be a sex/genderswap of Bro, paralleling Dave's exposure to niche pornography at a young age. This could be limiting to potential Bro applicants if they wish to have Bro be Avery's guardian but don't want to use the internet-porn-star character concept.

We take no issue with Avery having a porn star for a sister; however, that porn star being Bro steps on toes. We ask that you either keep "Sis" more vague or establish that she is not so clearly Bro: i.e. a separate, original character.

We hope to hear from you soon!