Indeed your application is great for the most part - however, we'd like to request clarification on his first Echo. While what is regained itself is acceptable, what is the connection between the cause and canon - for example was he injured in a similar way? Canon parallel Echoes are caused when characters are "reminded" of their past lives.
REVISION REQUEST
Indeed your application is great for the most part - however, we'd like to request clarification on his first Echo. While what is regained itself is acceptable, what is the connection between the cause and canon - for example was he injured in a similar way? Canon parallel Echoes are caused when characters are "reminded" of their past lives.
With that you'll be straight in!