REVISIONS APPLIED; - Jaina's first echo will not affect her hair color any. Due to the incident, I'm asking that it was initially white, but she dyes it after. It growing in differently will happen in another Echo in a few weeks from now. If this isn't feasible, then we can write it out entirely, though it would make 'less sense' any other time.
- Personality includes more emphasis on Jaina being a friendless loser who throws herself into fantasy novels essentially. This is why she has the quirk of trying to sound more old-fashioned; she intentionally does it in order to make herself more unique and perhaps desirable to those who meet her. This over-enthusiasm is intentional and needed in order to spruce up the gift Arthas has. Talks of experimenting in other religions and cult-like activity has been included. Additional family background has been included to emphasize her cleverness and why she's so passionate when it comes to seeking greater knowledge. A blurb about working as a missionary and volunteering has also been included.
- Added a couple more lines to the first person sample to further emphasize she is a dumb dork and capable of speaking "normally" when things fail to go her way.
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- Jaina's first echo will not affect her hair color any. Due to the incident, I'm asking that it was initially white, but she dyes it after. It growing in differently will happen in another Echo in a few weeks from now. If this isn't feasible, then we can write it out entirely, though it would make 'less sense' any other time.
- Personality includes more emphasis on Jaina being a friendless loser who throws herself into fantasy novels essentially. This is why she has the quirk of trying to sound more old-fashioned; she intentionally does it in order to make herself more unique and perhaps desirable to those who meet her. This over-enthusiasm is intentional and needed in order to spruce up the gift Arthas has. Talks of experimenting in other religions and cult-like activity has been included. Additional family background has been included to emphasize her cleverness and why she's so passionate when it comes to seeking greater knowledge. A blurb about working as a missionary and volunteering has also been included.
- Added a couple more lines to the first person sample to further emphasize she is a dumb dork and capable of speaking "normally" when things fail to go her way.