theearth: I really like this color you guys. (Blue-mod's icon) (I'M ON A HORSE)
Save the Earth Mods ([personal profile] theearth) wrote 2013-08-11 03:56 am (UTC)

REVISION REQUEST

Thank you for your interest in Save the Earth!

Before we pass formal approval, however, we'd like to ask for a couple of revisions!

First, the third-person sample is a tad brief - might we ask for an alternative or expanded one to allow for a bit more of a personal look into Edgeworth's personality and/or thought process?

Secondly - and this is a more minor one! - you mention Edgeworth's love of the Steel Samurai, but not what it suggests about him, especially in contrast to his usual decided lack of frivolity!

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