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Dirk Strider ♡ timaeusTestified ([personal profile] synchronous) wrote in [personal profile] theearth 2013-08-11 04:40 am (UTC)

Re: REVISION REQUEST

Makes sense! I was stalking your app responses and kind of expecting it.

First Echo: About a week after moving to Locke City, DJ visited the beach. It was his first time swimming in the ocean, as opposed to in a hyper-sterile indoor swimming pool, and being underwater triggered a mental image of swimming amongst a submerged city amidst skyscrapers and billboards. He kind of freaked out, almost drowned, and hasn't been back to the beach since.

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