Most of your app looks good - however, we'd like to see an expanded third-person sample from you. The current one is rather short, and we'd prefer to see something that shows off your insight into the character and her thought process.
We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to get back to you soon!
REVISION REQUEST
Most of your app looks good - however, we'd like to see an expanded third-person sample from you. The current one is rather short, and we'd prefer to see something that shows off your insight into the character and her thought process.
We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to get back to you soon!