I fixed it hopefully. Same link as the one in the first post. If you have any more issues with it please reply to this with corrections.
I didn't know about the lack of orphanages in germany. Now that I know I've completely rewritten it.
Her reincarnated history I have not yet cleaned up but I can if you really need it. Touhou canon and history is literally just a series of catastrophies that are solved by *insert main character here* with varying dialogue depending on character. Everything beyond that is fan speculation.
I tweaked it so individual events are more clearly listed and stand out more. It should be easier to read and all wiki links are now present on the app.
I added a lot more to her preincarnation personality and elaborated some. The problem is, again, the amount of story the characters are given. Sakuya's loyalty, for example, is never directly referenced, but its heavily implied due to how much trust Remilia puts into Sakuya and how Sakuya executes the actions perfectly despite Remilia being impulsive and vague.
NOTHING is more important to her than Remilia, Remilia's interests, Remilia's whims... Nothing even comes close. Some interpretations of the character literally list it as the only thing that is important to her, foregoing everything else. She was a character that was raised and molded to be the perfect servant for Remilia. I added some to it but there isn't much I can do that's not purely something that has no sanding with the character that I might sprinkle in for an accent but the whole point of the character, or at least what is known in canon, pivots entirely on Remilia.
Her abilities section is so extensive because I was trying to balance her. If you'd like me to shorten it to "the manipulation of all time and space and all that it implies" I will do that. I just feel its a little overpowered for any setting. Beyond that I further defined the part that's actually canon and the part that is my attempt to nerf her into something reasonable.
Beyond this you brought up several times to me that you were not familiar with her canon. If you need a second opinion, I suggest talking to your Remilia Scarlet player (Emilia) or your Flandre Scarlet player (Dani) for more information on the character as both of them play characters in close relationship to Sakuya and can confirm or deny if I'm giving the character justice. This probably would have cleared up some issues.
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I didn't know about the lack of orphanages in germany. Now that I know I've completely rewritten it.
Her reincarnated history I have not yet cleaned up but I can if you really need it. Touhou canon and history is literally just a series of catastrophies that are solved by *insert main character here* with varying dialogue depending on character. Everything beyond that is fan speculation.I tweaked it so individual events are more clearly listed and stand out more. It should be easier to read and all wiki links are now present on the app.
I added a lot more to her preincarnation personality and elaborated some. The problem is, again, the amount of story the characters are given. Sakuya's loyalty, for example, is never directly referenced, but its heavily implied due to how much trust Remilia puts into Sakuya and how Sakuya executes the actions perfectly despite Remilia being impulsive and vague.
NOTHING is more important to her than Remilia, Remilia's interests, Remilia's whims... Nothing even comes close. Some interpretations of the character literally list it as the only thing that is important to her, foregoing everything else. She was a character that was raised and molded to be the perfect servant for Remilia. I added some to it but there isn't much I can do that's not purely something that has no sanding with the character that I might sprinkle in for an accent but the whole point of the character, or at least what is known in canon, pivots entirely on Remilia.
Her abilities section is so extensive because I was trying to balance her. If you'd like me to shorten it to "the manipulation of all time and space and all that it implies" I will do that. I just feel its a little overpowered for any setting. Beyond that I further defined the part that's actually canon and the part that is my attempt to nerf her into something reasonable.
Beyond this you brought up several times to me that you were not familiar with her canon. If you need a second opinion, I suggest talking to your Remilia Scarlet player (Emilia) or your Flandre Scarlet player (Dani) for more information on the character as both of them play characters in close relationship to Sakuya and can confirm or deny if I'm giving the character justice. This probably would have cleared up some issues.