What needs a revision is the personality. We would like to hear more about her preincarnation's flaws. Please give us a paragraph or so expanding on these in reply to this comment.
Note: The two echoes that you envisioned are not related enough to be two parts of the same Tier 2. You can however add a second something that has a stronger connection to her ears now being pointy, if you wish to use the full tier two. If you want to do that, just tell us in reply to this comment along with your revision.
We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to get back to you soon!
Revision + Note
What needs a revision is the personality. We would like to hear more about her preincarnation's flaws. Please give us a paragraph or so expanding on these in reply to this comment.
Note: The two echoes that you envisioned are not related enough to be two parts of the same Tier 2. You can however add a second something that has a stronger connection to her ears now being pointy, if you wish to use the full tier two. If you want to do that, just tell us in reply to this comment along with your revision.
We apologize for the inconvenience and hope to get back to you soon!